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Monday 26 June 2017

devontae plan for Matariki Celebration

WALT recount a personal experience

Planning my recount

Title:

Orientation (Introduction)
Who?
Everone
What?
Matariki
When?
On friday
Where?
Room 16
What happened?

Tell it in the order it happened.
First of all we went to our assembly then at the end we all went back to our classes then we got our labels then after that   we went to the place that we need to go


Next when we got there we did the roll then after that we me and ben went to get our chrome book then we went back .
After that i had to go back because i need to change my password and after that i went back so i did my work   

Later on after lunch we got back to and i done my kite . then me and ben  asked  if we could go no games  .

A fuer minutes later we went to  assembly then we all went back to our maths class .

Reorientation (Summary)



Now that you have made a plan, it is time to write your recount in full sentences: First of all we went to our assembly then at the end we all went back to our classes then we got our labels then after that   we went to the place that we need to go Next when we got there we did the roll then after that we me and ben went to get our chrome book then we went back .After that i had to go back because i need to change my password and after that i went back so i did my work   A fuer minutes later we went to  assembly then we all went back to our maths class .  

1 comment:

  1. Wow I am super proud of how well you worked on this piece of writing you got straight into it and got it finished you even inspired the boys on your table that day to get the task done and you all worked very hard that morning! It's like a ripple effect in the water you do something and the rest will follow and I'm extra proud that it was something positive!! Keep inspiring people and being a good example!

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